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| Posted by Da Problem Child |
Battle Rules:
10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Minimum posts to vote: 20
Check in by: 05-05-09 at 10:25 PM
Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
| Posted by System |
| Da Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-09 10:25 PM. |
| Posted by Da Problem Child |
this flaw is cheap, i'll crush him like jaws and teeth
he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash
ill spark the beef, losing's imposible like a clock stop
his girl holds it in her mouth until i buss like pop rocks
Young kidd should be somewhere playin hop scotch,cuz your wack man
the dots on your head can kill you and eat you ghost like pacman
i spit the coldest b, you wont just shiver,...you'll break
really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake
were different because you suck....while my lines are heaven
understand you could blow up if you were a vitctim of 9-11 |
| Posted by Da Problem Child |
| blah verse just wanted to get a quick battle poppin....... |
| Posted by System |
| Young Kidd (LM) has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-09 11:53 PM. |
| Posted by Young Kidd (LM) |
BWHAHA i have less than 7 minutes to drop this...jgsalfdjlwkdjfdwkla Keystyleeee
I've Got 7 Minutes To Drop. Shit..You sLow Anyway..I'm Just Gonna Bull Shit It.
I'm To Fast For You..You Sent Me A PM Asking Me To Not Go "Over The Limit."
Ha. Kidd's Really A Infant..So Be Careful An Listen...Carefree When I'm Dissin..
So Give A Fuck About A Problem? I'm Still Too Young To Even Pay Attention...
Or Even Really Care About The Structure Of Verses...But If I Dump One Your Nervous..
The Real Problem Here Is You'll be Wacker Than Me..And I Dropped This Weak On Purpose..
You Can Have The Win...Your The Sickest Nigga Alive? and You Been A Vet..At Spittin Text?
Thats a Big Accomplisment..Next You'll Be Braggin About Your G'd Up Gang On the Internet...
lsadfjowdfjmdwlfkjwda wackk sauce |
| Posted by Young Kidd (LM) |
| BWHA i made it with like 30 seconds to spareee soon |
| Posted by Da Problem Child |
| people try to throw that "7 minute keystyle" bull shit in to cover up the fact that their verse is wack |
| Posted by LPMNDCTE |
Voted For: Da Problem Child
I've Got 7 Minutes To Drop. Shit..You sLow Anyway..I'm Just Gonna Bull Shit It.
I'm To Fast For You..You Sent Me A PM Asking Me To Not Go "Over The Limit."
Descent opener, but not hard hitting
Ha. Kidd's Really A Infant..So Be Careful An Listen...Carefree When I'm Dissin..
So Give A Fuck About A Problem? I'm Still Too Young To Even Pay Attention...
barely descent
Or Even Really Care About The Structure Of Verses...But If I Dump One Your Nervous..
The Real Problem Here Is You'll be Wacker Than Me..And I Dropped This Weak On Purpose..
Descent
You Can Have The Win...Your The Sickest Nigga Alive? and You Been A Vet..At Spittin Text?
Thats a Big Accomplisment..Next You'll Be Braggin About Your G'd Up Gang On the Internet...
barely descent
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this flaw is cheap, i'll crush him like jaws and teeth
he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash
this was a good opener
ill spark the beef, losing's imposible like a clock stop
his girl holds it in her mouth until i buss like pop rocks
barely descent
Young kidd should be somewhere playin hop scotch,cuz your wack man
the dots on your head can kill you and eat you ghost like pacman
Barely descent
i spit the coldest b, you wont just shiver,...you'll break
really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake
descent
were different because you suck....while my lines are heaven
understand you could blow up if you were a vitctim of 9-11
barely descent
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This was a mediocre battle. I feel that the best lines were:
i spit the coldest b, you wont just shiver,...you'll break
really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake
this flaw is cheap, i'll crush him like jaws and teeth
he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash
verses
I've Got 7 Minutes To Drop. Shit..You sLow Anyway..I'm Just Gonna Bull Shit It.
I'm To Fast For You..You Sent Me A PM Asking Me To Not Go "Over The Limit."
Or Even Really Care About The Structure Of Verses...But If I Dump One Your Nervous..
The Real Problem Here Is You'll be Wacker Than Me..And I Dropped This Weak On Purpose..
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I believe that Da problem child inched this battle out do to the opener punch, but Young Kidd was close with his two punches.
Vote - Da Problem Child |
| Posted by Da Problem Child |
| nice fair vote......big ups_____________________ |
| Posted by Young Kidd (LM) |
yea except for...i did only have seven minutes to drop that.
lol...
i'm not using an excuse or anything..i expect to lose this...
the time i dropped, the structure, the unfinished thoughts/sketchy punches.
thats not my forte son. lol
you can tell it was a keystyle. |
| Posted by NoCkTerNuL |
Voted For: Da Problem Child
Good Battle, but da problem child got this...
His punches were stronger and he actually had a flow to it
The lines that won it for me...
"he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash"
"really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake"
Young Kidd pretty much pointed out everything that was wrong with his verse. no structure, no flow, weak punches. I didn't even understand a lot of it.
no hate... good battle... peace... |
| Posted by Da Problem Child |
Quote:
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Originally Posted by Young Kidd (LM)
yea except for...i did only have seven minutes to drop that.
lol...
i'm not using an excuse or anything..i expect to lose this...
the time i dropped, the structure, the unfinished thoughts/sketchy punches.
thats not my forte son. lol
you can tell it was a keystyle.
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thats bullshit.......why the fuck would you try to loose a battle on purpose,ecpecially when you are undefeated, stop frontin! |
| Posted by Young Kidd (LM) |
lol your an IDIOT if you think i'm frontin.
point (1) its prom week and i've had two finals this week.
point (2) my grandma is in the hospital
point (3) i'm a senior which means crunch time
so i had no time to write out a verse, search for personals.
I'm not trying to LOSE but since mine was a Keystyle. and I doubt yours was..I expect that you'll win.
thats just what im saying. |
| Posted by NoCkTerNuL |
| dang, if you that busy, maybe you should hold off on the battling?? |
| Posted by Da Problem Child |
| thank you!........................................ |
| Posted by Young Kidd (LM) |
haha. I am. hence why this is the only one I did, if i couldn't of keystyled it i would of asked for an extention or taken the no show.
or for a rematch.
come after Sunday I shouldn't be so busy. lol.
But i figured what the hell why not throw down something so its not a no show.
shittt i dont care if i win or lose.
big ups if you win anyway. lol
i was just explainin why i keystyled it. |
| Posted by Da Problem Child |
| so did i,....big deal_____________________________ |
| Posted by JTR |
Voted For: Young Kidd (LM)
I've Got 7 Minutes To Drop. Shit..You sLow Anyway..I'm Just Gonna Bull Shit It.
I'm To Fast For You..You Sent Me A PM Asking Me To Not Go "Over The Limit."
clever wordplay but not too hard
Ha. Kidd's Really A Infant..So Be Careful An Listen...Carefree When I'm Dissin..
So Give A Fuck About A Problem? I'm Still Too Young To Even Pay Attention...
this was an ok punch
Or Even Really Care About The Structure Of Verses...But If I Dump One Your Nervous..
The Real Problem Here Is You'll be Wacker Than Me..And I Dropped This Weak On Purpose..
lmao this was funny
You Can Have The Win...Your The Sickest Nigga Alive? and You Been A Vet..At Spittin Text?
Thats a Big Accomplisment..Next You'll Be Braggin About Your G'd Up Gang On the Internet...
nah
vs.
this flaw is cheap, i'll crush him like jaws and teeth
he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash
bad wording, ok punch
ill spark the beef, losing's imposible like a clock stop
his girl holds it in her mouth until i buss like pop rocks
no
Young kidd should be somewhere playin hop scotch,cuz your wack man
the dots on your head can kill you and eat you ghost like pacman
the concept was ok but wording and punch weren't
i spit the coldest b, you wont just shiver,...you'll break
really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake
played but it was kinda funny
were different because you suck....while my lines are heaven
understand you could blow up if you were a vitctim of 9-11
you mean COULDNT blow up? Bad wording once again. And this shit is played anyways
Da Problem Child, work on your wording, you got a decent rhyme scheme and ok concepts but you word them into crappy punches
Young Kidd, you attempted more personals in this and your wordplay wasnt played, not the best shit but you came harder
v/YK |
| Posted by JTR |
Yo Da Problem Child, you're fucking wack
Do you got a mic or not? I want to rip you apart in an audio battle... |
| Posted by Da Problem Child |
| thats funni because with audio, itz a whole different story, are you sure u wanna do this? I'm pretty sure your dickriders would not want to see you loose.....lol |
| Posted by Da Problem Child |
| as a matter of fact the reason you have never lost was because you always have five dickrider votes every time |
| Posted by Young Kidd (LM) |
please tell me your talking about him.
and not me. |
| Posted by Da Problem Child |
| oh....not hate to you Young Kidd, that was to samarai jack AKA wanna be supper man |
| Posted by Da Problem Child |
| uppin............................................. |
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