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| Posted by Feeble Minded |
verses due on friday, at 12 am eastern time.
check in by wednesday
agree on line amount.
read LLL rules. good luck . |
| Posted by Horud Skys |
| 10 Lines.. |
| Posted by NewPort |
I need an extension feebs.. personal shit
I'll spit tomorrow for sure tho |
| Posted by Horud Skys |
Lesson 1: Crushing Ur Opps, Confidence
calm down Thug whyte be calm and steady,
& It Doesn't help his nerves, ^That I beat him already!
Aus hittin shit hard it must be a ramp
His weights the 'Talk of the town' ina fuckin detention Camp
Auspic + writing + battling= Total Disaster,
He'd step his game up but he broke his stair master
... originilaties the one thing he's still searchin to find,
creavtily is pool of imagination & Aus drownd in the depth of his mind.
Its pure skill I don't need luck to have his lady spread.
Ayo Aus
& ur lady's luck wasn't just smiling on me, she gave me head |
| Posted by NewPort |
Lesson 2: lesson 1 sux
Horud Skys spit? naw, but at least he can bitch..
He was in orgin ill..
til they realized he wasn't the right species of sick..
Imagin this, stick to freeposting cuz rappins not smart..
He believes his Sig?..
herb, lemme serve 2 words.. "Sarcastic Remarks"..
^He'll take that to heart, so im stoppin his fame..
droppin him gay..
Yeah, he had this win..............On opposite day..
This aint dance class, but he's watchin wat steps hes makin
Ill? dude ya own crew leader said..
Quote:
Originally posted by Feeble Minded
Horud Skys is respected by many a veterans but never seems to live up to his
reputation.
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Just grope n' bitch, but notice this, ya hope is shit
He got this win locked..
but realized he lost the key to open it..
blah |
| Posted by Verbal Kent |
Vote: Aus...
better all around verse... the sig line got it... then the feeb line backed it up...
Horud you've been seemin to not care lately... I don't know what it is... but... My op... |
| Posted by Walter Wall |
That 'feeble line' was actually said by me, feebs just posted it
I know Horuds been hav'n sum family issues and he broke his hand so its excusable
but he didn't come hard at all
Aus had an overall better verse, even though he used an opposite day line
the sig line was nice
Vote - Aus |
| Posted by N LitEnd |
Vote - Aus
Better Rounded Verse. Punches Hit Harder. In Horuds Verse, You Could See The Concept For A Dope Punch, But Then Never Really Connected All That Well. |
| Posted by Born To Kill |
Auspicious fucked this up pretty good...
Much better wordplay...
And even a recycled line from me (opposite day)!
The personals were much too hard and on mark.
The "sarcastic" and the Feeble quote killed this...
I liked Horud's opener, but, really it was kinda all alone as far as dopeness.
"Stairmaster" was eh..."Drowned" was a bit of a played concept.
All around better and more impactful...
Aus
Peace |
| Posted by mr g |
who wants to battle ma I will murder each one of you.
Dont post in LLL again herbie.
-Trapt |
| Posted by Token |
Auspicious takes this. Feeble line was dope. Sig line wasn't bad. Opposite day line sucked.
... originilaties the one thing he's still searchin to find,
creavtily is pool of imagination & Aus drownd in the depth of his mind.
This was rather decent.
V/Auspicious
Do you pronounce your name Au-Spi-Shus? Or Au-Spick-You-Us?
Just wondering. :o |
| Posted by NewPort |
| Au Spi Shus |
| Posted by Feeble Minded |
aush wins, yo.
horud .. < well that says it all . |
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