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| Posted by Chugs4Life |
aight ~10 lines~
you spit first
~letz~ do this |
| Posted by set-ignorance |
Bitches like you come soft, like piss paddles made with cloth
my explosive style could rip ya head off with critical intention
punk your delerious to even think 'Chugs4life' is a name worth to mention
feel the tention when its just me upon you, watching my words stick like glue
crazy ass bitch screaming "what the fuck am i gunna do, this is it im done for"
forget my fuckin battle records, thats just a miss-calculated batlle score
i'm raw like meat with a bacteria.....
watch me defeat this little bitch like he didn't even have a criteria...
you lack charisma, your better off being a cross dresser...
follow the footsteps of 'Boy george' better yet 'Garry glitter' |
| Posted by set-ignorance |
| ***Battle**** I fucked this up, hold up................................................ .................................................. ........................................... |
| Posted by set-ignorance |
Bitches like you come soft, like piss paddles made with cloth
my explosive style could rip ya head off with critical intention
punk your delerious to even think 'Chugs4life' is a name worth to mention
feel the tention when its just me upon you, watching my words stick like glue
crazy ass bitch screaming "what the fuck am i gunna do, this is it im done for"
forget my fuckin battle records, thats just a miss-calculated batlle score
i'm raw like meat with a bacteria.....
watch me defeat this little bitch like he didn't even have a criteria...
you lack charisma, your better off being a cross dresser...
follow the footsteps of 'Boy george' better yet 'Garry glitter' :thefinger |
| Posted by set-ignorance |
Man i fucked this up, completely fuck it i'll leave as it is
Peace |
| Posted by Chugs4Life |
here it goes,
when i'm done u'll SQUEAK~like~a~MOUSE, ur so borin u didnt even kick~ya~spit & I'm already DEEP~ASLEEP~on~the~COUCH
Define me as "OVERSEASONED" for the REASON that~I~ "slap the taste out ur MOUTH
"Crunch" mcs like CEREAL, these are CAESER~RHYMES cos i'm highly IMPERIAL Recordin u fuck ur mom on LEISURE~TIME is ur only raw MATERIAL
TORCH ya up slowly like the dynamite's FUSE, BEFORE I "explode" & my words let LOOSE
I'll "take ya out," with verbal ABUSE, "twisted & CONFUSED" like unwinded SCREWS
I "RAP~so~FAST" so when my lyrics DASH~PAST they leave ya sizzling like melting GLASS
AT~LAST i'll STAMP~on~ur~ASS cos i'm known to SMASH
I FEAR~NONE, "hold ya fate" cos i'm flowing like RUM
DROP~this~QUEER~ONE only with text but it's still forceful enough to POP~ur~EARDRUMS |
| Posted by ~Yo What Up~ |
set ignorance - wack structure.......flow was hard to catch on to.........vocab was ok..........some of the multis were ok...........wordplay was basic.........some of the punches hit pretty hard........no good personals........
chugs4life - ok structure........flow fell off a lil.........vocab was ok.........multis were tight as hell.........wordplay was ill...........punches hit hard............ok personals.......
conclusion - chugs takes this in multis, wordplay, and punches so he gets my vote......
VOTE - CHUGS4LIFE
yo since i took the time to leave my honest feedback id appreciate if u two did the same.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110019
thanx........ |
| Posted by set-ignorance |
| Yo, at least you were honest, it was whack... Peace |
| Posted by Chugs4Life |
| uppin1..................................... letz get some votes |
| Posted by Chugs4Life |
| uppin2............................................ ........... |
| Posted by Chugs4Life |
| uppin3............................... c mon letz get some votes on dis battle |
| Posted by Chugs4Life |
| uppin4............................................ .................... need dem votez |
| Posted by Chugs4Life |
| uppin for the last time another slept on battle.................... |
| Posted by DNUFO2 |
flow-goes to set-ignorance I liked it.
punches-chugs. Your structure is cool to me. i shouldn't be giving advice.
word use-Chugs
good battle I give my vote to Chugs4Life.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token |
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