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Posted by Taktik
Each team will drop 20 lines in total........10 lines each

Check-In's Due : Wednesday December 31, 2003 , 11:59 pm
Verses Due : Sunday 4 January , 2004 , 11:59 pm

Battles will usually be done sooner but because of New Years, ill be leniant.

Voting Done : Tuesday January 6, 2004 , 11:59 pm

Remember Come dope & Break a leg

Posted by Dez
checkin in for Aus and myself.

Posted by NewPort
werd.. what he said

Posted by Koalatee
Quality here for both Mentill & myself.

Posted by MeNTiLL
Nevermind ...

Posted by Koalatee
Yo, DooDe - I MoVe WeiGhT; iN fAcT, My "BoMbS-hUrTLe-FeDs"
1999 called - it wants its clothes back! (see: mock turtle-necks)
ThE SheLLs DiD tHE jOb; aLtHoUgH, I "mEaNt-To-MiSs-YoUr-HeAD"
Cocky Fool .
I could create novels of punches with your Member Pictures thread
My BoYs CaN dO tHE jOb; LeAviN tHiS "biTcH-hUrT. .-fEeL-mY-maNs"
With his verse, Dez is Billed a Cowherd - like Pittsburgh Steelers fans
I'M UpSeT, Yo - it's AbOuT oVeR! ThErE aiN'T nO "cHoiCe-TO-BaRtEr"
Either you suck or you were late - both explain your choice of partner
TwO StYLeS jUsT bEaT yOu - mY "CLiPs-CoULd-FiNiSh-SeTs,-D. ."
How low can you go?! Suffering losses to schizophrenic textcees :rolleyes:

Posted by MeNTiLL
This cat got no legs Tryin' to give me a run in text
"The Regime ... Where Your Not" No kiddin' son I left
Die "vet" - Pre write your verse so U can lose kindly
Still gonna look like ur avvy - Throwin' punches blindly
It's hard to be timely Wit/out a watch dog I riddle fakes
Dude supposedly ate 59 MC's ... Yet still a middle weight
This cat gotta be a atheist the way him winnin' is hopeless
Webster gave U a promise of success in this battle -
I guess he broke it
Ur a bad hostess dog - Im the one servin' U Auspic
Looks like U had an omen on ur shoulder ...
Till it flew away and U lost it

*Taktik approved the edit of one word

Posted by Dez
Aus

Artificial Intelligence? you suck in so many ways
good thing you left regime.. you were gon' get kicked out anyways
^ thats the real reason.. you on sum imposter shit
teamin w. Hod dont make u a vet.. you barely on the ameatur rapper roster list
maybe i aint too quick, shit i might be slower in fact
get on your level? but my platform cant go any lower than that
chokin this fag.. a record diss? you cant be serious son
n' how you gon' put 10 lines on me
when against newbs you cant
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101917]make an appearence for one?
thats it im thru, period cuz... you been done served
n' you thought you was ill.. til' Taktik approved the edit of one word



Dez


Dez takes no prisoners, so K, lets leave looks out of this man
Cuz Hods the only person alive..That Casper can tell to get a tan!
These Cowboys stand.. back 2 back in their tightey-whiteys
Dezll slay these Buffalo Bills twice..like Dallas teams in the 90's
By critical Akklaim, Aus and Dez dispose of cheap banter
Chance of MK winning is Sub-Zero...
Putting these kids on ice like old video game characters!
Its the voters demand.. winner is what well be appointed
cuz they read your verse expecting Quality..





and were sadly dissapointed.

Posted by Feeble Minded
^ decent battle Mr. Dez. This was a decen battle. one verse from each side was good. from one team, Ghods verse was good, but the other kids was average. But, from dez's team, aus's verse was really good but dez's verse was slightl below average.. :(

tough decision: vote: Aus & Dez.

Posted by Pied Piper
Man,that white girl cant rap,can you rap better?

Posted by Koalatee
^ No, I most certainly can not.

Posted by Evolve
lol ^^ i like that bitch in your sig.. from real world

Vote Aus & Dez

Reason: They were better... & i am to lazy to explain why... i just
felt Dez's verse... thought Mentill came decent... Koalatee, i liked
your little gimmick verse... but i thought Aus & Dez were better

Posted by Mystery~murdera
I wasn't feelin Dez that much but I thought
Aus came ight. I thought Mentill killed Aus
and G.Hod was a little above Dez. examples

Mentill:
Quote:
This cat got no legs Tryin' to give me a run in text
"The Regime ... Where Your Not" No kiddin' son I left
lol
Quote:
It's hard to be timely Wit/out a watch dog I riddle fakes
Dude supposedly ate 59 MC's ... Yet still a middle weight

crafty...

Aus:
Quote:
maybe i aint too quick, shit i might be slower in fact
get on your level? but my platform cant go any lower than that
only line i really felt that much

Dez:
your first line was ight. The link thing didnt do anything for me though. Its just that it was a personal.

G.Hod:
[quoet]I'M UpSeT, Yo - it's AbOuT oVeR! ThErE aiN'T nO "cHoiCe-TO-BaRtEr"
Either you suck or you were late - both explain your choice of partner[/quote] only line i really felt...

whats up with all the links
comin back into play all
of a sudden? and pic disses??

vote - mentill

I've seen EVERYBODY come better,.

Posted by MeNTiLL
Damn ... 2-1 in thier favor ... Can we get some more votes ?

Posted by Dadi Kewl
I was feelin aus and dez's more...
the gimmicky thing was alright...and ment's verse was
a little bit on and off....
Aus's verse was aight...liked the last line
And thought dez's verse was thew best outta all four
so

Aus and Dez.

Posted by Emerge
ThE SheLLs DiD tHE jOb; aLtHoUgH, I "mEaNt-To-MiSs-YoUr-HeAD"
Cocky Fool .
I could create novels of punches with your Member Pictures thread

/\ Quality best bar

This cat gotta be a atheist the way him winnin' is hopeless
Webster gave U a promise of success in this battle -
I guess he broke it

/\ Mentil best bar

maybe i aint too quick, shit i might be slower in fact
get on your level? but my platform cant go any lower than that

/\Aus best bar

Dez takes no prisoners, so K, lets leave looks out of this man
Cuz Hods the only person alive..That Casper can tell to get a tan!

/\dez best bar lol kinda played but funny still

all in all this was a decent battle...nice punches thrown
some damn funny personals both teams came witty
both teams had consistency...both had some filler in there

My vote - Mentil and Quality they a bit more consistent
but they edged it out this was a tough call for me....

Posted by Noda Ropes
3-2 favor of aus & dez, can we please get more votes in here ?
thanks to all who voted; unfortuanately the voter turnout wasnt too high

Posted by Taktik
V/ Aus and Dez better verse overall




They win and go 1-0